rkmonkey blips

Friday, March 19, 2010

control

open a
it's all spinning away
out of control

i won't mind just one more day
taking control

keys are stuck nothing to say
out of control

g dn A
nothings coming easy anymore X3

must be one my way

can't forget what we said
out of control

i would take just one more word
taking control

rolls right off like the rain
out of control

d a
no one feels
no one knows
no one feels
like i do

25 comments:

  1. You wrote this??? OMG!! I love it...have the music ready for it? Are you mind-melding with me? I have felt this way for 2 days now...so what inspired you?

    Gayle

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  2. Did I read on blip correctly this is for me? Or am I hallucinating?

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  3. Got some music working. Funny this virtual world. I have been feeling this lately and was thinking of you while writing.

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  4. Yes..funny thing...shall I tell you a secret?

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  5. Secret? If you share it won't be so secret.

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  6. True...so shall I just save it and not tell you?

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  7. Must leave to your judgment and discretion. But, of course, I am curious.

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  8. ahhh...that evil curiosity...it's what makes us create...it's what destroys us...
    Okay, I know you don't know much about me...but since I was a little girl, I always wanted someone to write me a song...and look...it's you! No, don't worry, I'm not going to turn into your stalker or anything...it's just very sweet...and touching...and brought a tear to my eye...and means more to me than you will ever, ever know...you...someone who does not know me at all...yes, the virtual world is a funny thing..

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  9. I am amazed at how you share your incredible thoughts and words. You have courage I wish I had. I am always grateful for your words of encouragement. I am glad to have you to share a side of me that mostly stays hidden.

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  10. Then our amazement is a mirror...for I see what you do and think "wow, I wish I could do what he does"...and just so you know, my courage sometimes falters. It did yesterday in a huge way...but I am who I am...and you are who you are...and my world is a much better place with your sensitive soul as a satellite around it :) I promise you... there are many out there who would feel the same I do if they heard your music...and could see into your soul...I thank you for giving me a peek!

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  11. Thank you for your kindness. I will let you know when I record the tune.

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  12. Thanks my friend...and RK? You are very special! :)

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  13. blipt it to you. download link http://bit.ly/d2fdFA

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  14. I'm going to go listen to it on blip. The download link won't work...if you get a chance, can you send it again? You are so awesome!

    Gayle

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  15. Good God RK...it is a wonderful song...I especially love the key changes towards the end..it is just freaking beautiful. Does the music just come to you like a gift from the music muses? Or is there a melody always playing in your head? I'm so respectful of musicians as I could never write a tune..lyrics yes, tune no....

    You have made my day my friend...and your voice, that voice that you are so humble about...it sounds amazingly like Joe Walsh...but you've probably been told that before. So did you/are you/will you be playing in a band?
    You made today a very special day for me....thank you! <3

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  16. Glad you like it. I added another mix and blipt it to you with the links. Should auto download. If not I will set up download from another source for you.

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  17. I don't just like it...I'm floored by it. Absolutely floored...I was wrong when I said you made my day...you made my life :)
    Thank you!
    Gayle

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  18. I listened to this song probably...oh, 40 or 50 times today!! Think I obssess much? lol I love it!

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  19. I have listened to it more than I usually listen to my own stuff. Has grown on me a bit.

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  20. So where can I hear more of your music? Is it someplace on the web? Is all of it on blip? I listen to this one daily....very nice :)

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  21. I have odds and ends around. I hope to have some new ones soon.

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  22. Anonymous12:30 PM

    Thank you for your kind comment on my blog..but just so you know...I am very aware of still waters and how deeply they flow...I am like crashing waves, you my friend, are the undertow.
    Gayle

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  23. I thought Ihad your email address but I don't...I wanted to send you an Easter card, so this will have to suffice :) Happy Easter!

    Gayle

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  24. Thanks very much. Happy Friday and Easter!!!

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  25. Please don't lose touch with me. I deleted my blip account....AGAIN....you can still find me at my gmail account, on my blog, twitter or at last.fm though...okay? I enjoy our friendship and would hate for it to end, so please don't be a stranger. Please???

    Gayle

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